- Shorter Paragraphs (throughout)
- Include post-colonial theory Fanon (Page 3, Para 7)
- More representation theories, Dyer (Page 3. Para 6) Alvarado (Page 3, Para 6)
- Fix footnotes formatting (throughout)
- Improve textual analysis (Page 2, Para 6)
- Order books in alphabetically (Bibliography)
- Add books to works consulted (Bibliography)
- Add moving images to bibliography (Bibliography)
Other Changes:
- Galtung and Ruge's theory (Page 2, Para 2)
- Propp's theory (Page 2, Para 4)
- Mulvey's theory (Page 3, Para 8)
- Added 7 quotes
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